Fantastic work! I love your voice and the unique energy that you have in during your read! It's clear that you're having a lot of fun during it as well. I thought that the areas where you decided to pick up the pace was a good choice. In some areas, perhaps consciously slowing down the read by marking/pencilling in those lines could help in the 'flubbed' areas that you identified. Keep it up!

Fun is what we're looking for! Haha, great read. Although you did slow down to try and focus on your articulation (which is great), you tended to skip over a lot of sounds in the words you were saying. Instead of "hospitable," it sounded like "hospi-ibal," etc. Also, you tended to get a bit too "staccato," bouncing and pausing at random points with your voice during the sentence. This would come more naturally with practice, of course. Aside from that, don't be afraid to REALLY bring the energy! Overall, good work, excited to hear your submission next week.