Hey Cora! Starting with what I think you might be able to improve on, if I were standing on the opposite side of a gym as the HW suggests we picture, I'm not sure I'd be able to hear you. Apart from that, though, I love the friendliness of your tone! It really sounds like a commercial I'd hear on the radio. I also think you delivered that last "thank you" line really well!

Hey Cora! Great work. I recommend really focusing in on your breathing. Sometimes the breaths would bleed into your recording, but the main criticism is the shallowness of your breathing. Remember to take big breaths during your breaks, giving you the power to really bring the heat in your performance! Once you work on that, I would say to slow down a bit while simultaneously raising your energy level. Overall, good stuff, just keep practicing tough reads like this and I know you'll improve fast!