Hi Allimamah, I enjoyed the personality that you were able to inject into the flow of the advertising, made it sound fresh and unique as well as fun, great enunciation too. It seems there were a few pops and peaks within the recording which might have meant that you were a bit close to the mic. For a first time you did a great job and you have a nice voice!

Hi Allison! I liked your pacing a lot, but your articulation felt a bit inconsistent. You were certianly speaking clearly throughout the read, however some words would blur together like "service-selection." Just remember to keep the entire read at the same, slow/steady and consistent pace. Remember to take BIG breaths in-between pauses! Also, your energy was good, but I believe you can give a lot more. Overall, great stuff!