Aaaa I like this a lot!!! Your voice is very friendly-sounding! ♥ And you don't sound congested at all to me!! I wouldn't have known if you hadn't said that! I don't think I am qualified at all to give critique, so all I'll say is that maybe if you put a teensy liiittle more energy into selling this product it will be even more convincing that it already is hehe so keep it up!!! (ɔ◔‿◔)ɔ ♥

This was a great read! The pace was mostly okay, but the words felt too "staccato." Too bouncy. Feel free to slow it way down, keeping the pace consistent throughout the entire performance. If you work on that and focus on your clarity, the read will be more articulate. Aside from that, bring that energy!! This will become easier in time, but don't be afraid to let your voice go and...give us your all! Project until the entire room is filled with your voice! With these critiques in mind, I can tell that with practice you will fill a great role in the VO community.