I love your energy, really get the smooth-talking salesman vibe with the words you put emphasis on.

Wonderful enunciation my man, you killed it! My only critique would be don't forget to breathe in between words when you need to, there were a few times you needed just a little more air to finish the next word. Other than that, Nicely done :)

Hi Christian! I like the character you were going for, you definitely nailed the voice. My main critique for you is that sometimes your voice was almost TOO smooth. Your words would blur together to the point where it felt like one long word at times. Maybe this can be fixed by slowing down just a bit (the speed honestly fit your voice for the most part). Also, your breaths should be bigger and less shallow, which will mean you are taking LESS of them, which is always nice. My last piece of advice is that, despite the energy pouring into my headphones, I think you can give even more. Give us that last 35% of energy, not being afraid to give too much, and THEN if you need to you can pull it back. But yeah, overall, loved it! Great stuff.

really loved your voice on this! only thing i can think to say on this is try to keep from peaking