Hey Caboose :) This was a really good take! You have great breath control and good articulation👍. I like the energy in the read and the little bits of your personality put into it ^^. My small critique would be, to play around with your pacing a bit more other then that, good job on the first assignment.😄

Hey Mike! Your voice is great, I can feel the effort you put into this performance. That said, I felt like you were trying to move at a fast pace to match the energy you were bringing with your voice. Instead, take a big breath, and go at a pace where you clarify can come out over everything else. Also, be careful not to let your big breaths bleed into your performance. Once you work on these things, THEN focus on bringing more energy from your gut, filling up that room space. This was a great read, I can't wait to see how you improve!