This is so great! Especially for your first time recording. Your enunciation is overall very crisp, and your tone is very charming. I can't wait to see what you'll do by week 6.

This is so good! I refuse to believe this is your first time because this was great, everything is so clear and crisp and your voice is just delightful!

That little laugh at the end. Lol. Great sounding voice. You sound nice and clear too

I really enjoyed this! I was smiling throughout your entire recording, heck, I'm still smiling as I'm typing this lol

It's very exciting that this is your first time recording yourself! This is the beginning of your VO journey, how cool is that. You set a nice pace for yourself, but I do feel like you can slow it down just a bit to improve your articulation. No shame in not going at a lightning-fast pace in this difficult read. You have a fun voice with a lot of character, but I feel that you can make it even MORE fun by adding much more energy!! Speak from your gut, REALLY got ham on the voice and character you are going for, and this read would be perfect. Keep practicing your breathing as well. Great job, especially for your first ever take!