Alex, nice work! I think you did a great job reading this expressively and balancing the marketing-speak intonations with fluid delivery!

Hi Alex! Very crisp read, there were some flubs here and there but this was a solid take. My main critique for you is the number of small, shallow breaths you took in the read. Instead of taking a breath after every few words, try to take big breaths in-between sentences to really give you that power to go through the entire section. And if you need to pause and take a breath, make sure it's not a small one. Make every breath count! Other than that, the energy was great, articluation was mostly solid, and I think if you honed it on that breathing, you'd be set for this script. Good job!