I love the energy that you gave here. The only thing that I should say is watch your breath, I noticed that your breathing in certain areas kinda made you stutter a bit. But even so, it's good that you still pushed through that's the key to showing them what you can do.

Hi Dasha! I love the character you brought to this performance, it didn't feel like I was listening to any typical sales-person. Make sure you are taking BIG breaths in-between takes using the techniques we learned in class, and make sure they don't bleed into the words you are speaking. Also, feel free to slow down whenever the read gets too difficult to focus on your articulation. The energy was great, but I still feel you can bring even MORE to this take. Fill up the entire room with your voice! Keep practicing these things. Overall, great read, you did a great job despite the difficulty of the read. Keep it up!