Hello wanted to start with saying that you have wonderful breath control and very consistent energy throughout the reading. I will say that it gave me like a cartoony sales person vide and that really cool. I do want to point out that there is a pattern to your voice in the reading that makes it feel a little monotone, or sing songy. over all great reading

Wow, you killed it!! I loved the energy you provided, along with the articulation you delivered. It did have a rhythmic tone to it, though.

Your voice certainly fit the part! I think you may have focused too much on changing your voice, however. At this point the voice itself doesn't even really matter! Instead, focus on your projection. Your articulation was good (there were a few times where you slipped up just a bit) but really if you spoke more from your gut and added in another layer of energy, you'd be set for this read. However, the pacing was great, the flow was smooth, and I could tell you had a lot of fun. Great!