Fantastic projection and good breathing imo. I could hear the reverb a little but even mine did that with projecting so much. Great read and loved the theatrics.

Ooh, I like the style you went with on this! You took your time and really focused on your articulation and clarify. I love it! Your voice is so full of character, I feel like you can really capitalize upon this as you progress through your future voice-over career. That said, your character would come out even MORE if you added some more energy to your read. Both articulation and projection are HUGE during most reads in VO, especially like this, and so if you were to project more from your gut, this would be such a flawless read. Great work!