This definitely sounds like a commercial for a mattress or furniture store that comes on TV and tries to get your attention re: their latest sale. I like it!

Love the tone you set. I think my critique would be that it lost some energy toward the middle. When doing long monologues, the energy at the start has to stay all the way through at least when doing something that sounds like a sales pitch. Other than that I’m loving the sound of your voice and the articulation was spot on. Nice job on keeping your breath under control as well.

This was a phenomenal read! Well done, Marcos. Your energy was fantastic, I think you could maaaybe give just a bit more especially as the read continues, but overall it was great. I'll buy whatever you offer me! My main criticism for you would be to practice your breathing more using the exercises Brendan talked about. There are a few times where I can hear you taking a breath after just a few words, which I know is hard to avoid for a high-energy read like this, but it's important for keeping your voice in top condition. Your clarity in speaking was nice, although I did hear a few times where you could have slowed down just a bit and articulated certain words. Overall, this was such a fun read, very well done!