The assignment encurage me to give feedback here it is... i love how your voice sounds clear an correct to the point an you knew what you were doing even tyhough your voice sounds great, but it was missing personality to feel like a sales person or talking to crowded place. i wish i could pronouce those word with that clarity of your voice you have a powerful voice which can get people to listen but gotta add that personality :) your voice is great :).

Your voice is fantastic! The smooth way you talk is captivating, and I can see you fitting into many types of VO work in your future career with the voice alone. As far as the read goes, feel free to loosen up and go ALL in on that energy! Project as if you are standing on a stage, filling the entire auditorium with your voice (without yelling or screaming). If we add some power to your voice, I feel that it can make the read that much more interesting! Articulation could use a bit more fine-tuning, but overall, I felt that part of your read was pretty on point. Nice job.