I Love the energy here! The inspiration of an 80's style shaddy car salesman is great. Way to push through that middle section too. Your resets there were good. blowing out the lips, shaking it off, running the line again then getting back into it to on that line! Not to mention it's super relatable, this scipt is a mouthful XD

The energy here is fantastic! Your voice also really fits the salesman-style feeling this script is certainly going for. If you were to do another take, I would recommend slowing down just a bit, and don't be afraid to focus more on articulation rather than speed. Even if speed seems like it's important, always focus more on articulation over trying to go really fast. Also, I love that you spent some time to pause, take some deep breaths, and give it another go! This is REALLY important. Well done, this was a fantastic read!