Rocket League Anime Parody: Octane Triad Episode 1
Matic for Itonashi
Has trouble believing in himself, strong-willed, endearing, caring. Similar to “Rock Lee”.
Itonashi: No! He’s right Hoshi.., I’m just a loser, you should leave me behind before things get too serious..
イトナシ：ホシ、いいんだ！その通りだから..、意気地なしのおれなんかほっとけよ、手遅れにならないように。
(Itonashi: Hoshi, inda! Sonotori Da kara.., Ikuji nashi no ore nanka hottoke yo, teokure ni naranai yo ni.)
Itonashi: Ahhhhhh Hoshi, you’re right damn it! I did it again. I have to start believing, this isn’t just about me it’s about all of us.
イトナシ：あぁホシの言う通りだ！またおれの悪い癖が出た。自分だけでなく、おれたちみんなのために、おれは自分を信じなくちゃならない。
(Itonashi: A~a Hoshi no iu tōrida! Mata ore no warui kuse ga deta. Jibun dakedenaku, ore-tachi minna no tame ni, ore wa jibun o shinjinakucha naranai.)
Itonashi: Sensei, please let this work! Unmei Furikku!
イトナシ：先生見ててくれ！フェイトフリック！
(Itonashi: Sensei mi tete kure! Feitofurikku!)
Overall pretty good. I few comments from me. I think your voice is better for Goro if you want to try that, but please try Ito again. I hear some buzzing in the background, and as for the lines I would like to hear some more emotion. The last line should be like "sensei....! please let this work!! FATE FLICKUUU, reading my script might help you see the implications of the lines too. I have it linked in the project.