Batman: Death of the Family Motion Comic Episode 1
Jrbloooom for Officer Guadalupe
Later 20's, early 30's, Officer Guadalupe became one of the people Joker killed when he came back to Gotham.
(After Joker shuts the power at GCPD and revels himself to the officers in the darkness. Nervous) 'Joker? Joker is in here?'
(Joker singles out Guadalupe, aiming to kill him. Guadalupe is scare with perhaps erratic breathing) 'Don't. D-don't'
(Quick gasp and effort noise when Joker snaps his neck)
You line reading didn't match the energy to show how scared and nervous the character is. He, along with every other cop is in the dark, when he talks, he talks louder to make sure everyone else can hear him.
Sorry, do you want me to retry?
Sure if you want. You were nearly there, the voice was good, but the energy didn't match what was happening.