[Undertale Cinematic Dub] Toriel Recasting
LittleRedHen42 for Toriel
Toriel is the warm, motherly and somewhat neurotic former queen of the underground. She is kind, compassionate, and a bit socially awkward, constantly cracking the worst jokes imaginable. As a mother and former queen, she knows always believes she knows what's best. Toriel’s voice should sound maternal but authoritative, and potentially a bit off-beat. Her isolation has made her a bit socially inept, and the awkwardness or nervousness in her voice should reflect this.
(chuckle) My child, it seems as if you must stay here for a while. But… looking at all the great friends you have made… I think… I think you will be happy here.
[Urgent] Frisk! This is all just a bad dream! Please! Wake up!
It seems that everyone is quite eager to set off… Frisk… You came from this world… right? So... you must have a place to return to, do you not? ...What… Will you do now?
You've got a nice voice, but if you don't mind me saying, the delivery here is really stiff and could use some loosening up. It definitely sounds like you're reading the lines. Could you give it another shot? Maybe try to come at the lines a bit more organically? Don't be afraid to make facial expressions or move a bit if it helps you get in the groove. Again, you've got a nice voice, just a little stiff.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm still new at VA, so I'm learning a lot as I go along! I will give it another shot - will try to re-record tonight! Thanks again!