Hi, thank you for your audition, since you asked, I will give my personal critique :). The emotive expression is great, it seems like you are thinking about what you are actually saying instead of just reading lines. As far as the sound and timbre, I would simply suggest that you relax your voice a bit and use your natural voice more. The harshness with which you are speaking sounds somewhat forced, and in addition, is probably not great for your voice if you were to do such voices often. Let the characters you play be derived from your natural way of speaking for a more pleasant sound :). Thanks again, cheers!