RWBY: REMNANTS [Fanmade Illustrated Video Series]
BlindedSmoker for Qrow Branwen
Qrow was the bad boy of Beacon back during his student years, who would later join Summer to form Team STRQ. He has a rebellious yet mysterious tone of voice, often dead serious one moment and snarky the next. He acts like he has something to hide, being deliberate with his words, but responds with biting remarks instead of any sort of paranoia or insecurity. His story involves meeting eyes with a young Summer Rose during initiation and cementing their unsteady partnership.
Both he and his sister were part of a tribe who lived beyond Vale, but when he arrived at Vale, he adapted to the city life quickly.
Auditioners should expect to also voice adult Qrow, but young Qrow is more prominent. He would not have the same amount of gravelly texture in his voice during his teen years, having a more sharp voice, but nonetheless carries the same roguish, devil-may-care behaviour.
[Young Qrow. Qrow meets the silver-eyed girl he heard so much about, Summer. For all the hype surrounding her, she seems pretty clumsy to end up having him run over and save her...]
"You're welcome."
[Summer protests, saying she didn't need help.]
"Is that how you treat someone who saved you? Are all Vale girls as dense as you?"
[Young Qrow. This Summer girl won't leave Qrow alone, and now she wants to be teammates. Annoying...]
"Not interested. If I had to save your twinkly butt, I'm not gonna be on your team."
[Summer: "Then who else are you gonna team with, wise guy??"]
"My sister, that's who I'm lookin' for. She's the best warrior I know, would kick your ass ten times over."
[Adult Qrow. Replying a surprised Ruby, as he is in Beacon for a while as a substitute teacher]
"What does it look like, kiddo? I’ve graduated from Signal! From teaching a bunch of brats… to teaching annoying, hormonally charged brats."
Im so sorry for it being so long, i've never done something like this before, also could i try out for cinder?
Thanks for the audition! For next time, it would certainly be better to simply voice the quotes, as reading the descriptions tend to disrupt the flow of both the person voicing and the person listening. Do be aware too that yes, while the character is known to be a bit of a rebel, the writer would still expect the lines to be read a certain way, otherwise it may cause troubles like having to rewrite the script. But since this is just an audition and you didn't change much at all, it's fine. As for the performance itself, I think it can be stronger. Listening to it, especially with the added scene descriptions in between, I can tell that you are reading from a script, rather than performing as the character. Try to convey more of the character's mental state and emotions in that moment, as a tip. Also, you're free to audition for whoever you want!