RWBY: REMNANTS [Fanmade Illustrated Video Series]
Bill Callas for Headmaster Ozpin
The enigmatic Headmaster of Beacon Academy.
He has a measured, sagelike voice, and sounds like he has seen and done everything. He speaks with authority and firm conclusion. He has the bearings of a wise old man or mentor. Like a stranger met upon a crossroads, an old man passing by, offering advice.
Does not have to sound like the show, but should exhibit these traits. Voice can be deeper or of equal tone to the original.
[Bargaining with Blake, after having caught her trying to enter Vale from beyond the city. He sounds measured, careful, but also considerate towards Blake's choice and safety.]
"Miss Belladonna, I offer you a choice. You can return the way you came, no questions asked, back to the battlefield you escaped from… or you can take refuge here. Become a Huntress. Fight for Vale. Just know... that if you accept, your former allies will now be your enemies."
[Speaking to General Ironwood privately regarding a certain incident long ago. He sounds serious, with a hint of regret.]
"I would advise caution, General. Summer Rose was not the only Hunter to die on that tragic day. Many good souls were lost, from my side… and yours. I suggest a more subtle approach this time. Only strike when we are absolutely certain of it."
[Interacting with Oscar. Relaxed, lighthearted and polite. He should sound like he takes quite a liking to Oscar and values what he says.]
"Ah, there you are, Oscar. No, I don't need anything, thank you."
[Oscar talks about work that he needs to do.]
"Hm... why don't you take the rest of day off? You've yet to fully tour Vale since you arrived, it would be a shameful opportunity to waste on a day as nice as this, yes?" *chuckles*
Audio is good. I'd say the performance sounds very "quiet", like Ozpin is mumbling or speaking softer than normal, which in turn makes him seem more sneaky and less open. The quality of voice is good, and the performance is decent, but can be stronger. He sounds like he could be expressing the same emotion on all three lines, so perhaps try feeling more into the moment of that scene and its context, then acting it out.
Yeah I think will give it another shot, I saw this late last night so that's probably why it sounds quiet as well. I tend to do that sometimes while I'm looking around CCC late at night. But nevertheless thank you for the Feedback!
No problem!