The Rising of the Shield Hero Abridged One-Shot
Fall Vixen for Queen Mirellia Melromarc
Personality
Since Melromarc is a matriarchy and a monarchy, the Queen holds the most power. She is usually very stern and serious, but in the abridged one shot, she is a bit more playful and girly.
Voice
Mature; Medium low - low pitch; She can have a slight posh accent since she is royalty, but it doesn't have to be a strong one
Line Count
17 lines; She has the most dialogue in this script
(quieting the room; serious) Hush hush. It is now tea time, and the Queen has tea to spill. (beat) (giddy and sing-songy) These two have committed high treason! *giggle*
(Pulls out long list and reads out Myne's crimes)*Sigh* Okay let’s see… For Malty… (low-volume voice, almost to self)formed a coup de tat with the high priest, murder attempt against her sister, convincing Motoyasu that gnome’s exist... Umm.. Arson, graffiti, slander... Oh you get the idea!
(Gravely Serious) GUILTY! Off with their heads!
Looking back on the comments that you had left on the auditions of others, I am planing on doing a re-audition. The things that I plan on correcting is the over all bassey tone and mouth noises. I also think there are a few Pops and harsh sibilance's that could be avoided as well. The main part that I would like to correct however is the Acting, it to me sounded a little bland and forced in some parts and the Giggle and delivery on the last line need to have a lot more enthusiasm to them. If there is anything else that I should change or not change in the Re-audition any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
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