Painting for No-One Narration
HeathVanBern for Shawn
If you are expecting a super rich character, sorry to disappoint. Shawn is the epitome of generic. Imagine the most predicable response to anything; that's Shawn. Being generic is the whole point of the character, which does not translate to monotone. There should still be flavor in his voice, but, again, imagine the most expected tone for each line if that makes sense.
[You hear someone call your name in your house at night. You live alone. You say this line to yourself.]
“Who the hell said that?”
[Someone's in your house, and you are afraid.]
“Who’s there?! And what the hell are you doing in my house?!”
[No one response to the previous line's questions.]
“Answer me!”
You sound super familiar, but I can't put my finger on where I've heard your voice before. As for the audition itself, I liked the confusion in your voice, but I think your delivery was a bit too slow. This might sound weird, but I think you put a bit too much personality in this voice, especially in the last line. If this was any other role, I would not be saying that since I love it when people ham things up, but this character is about as stale as bread.
Maybe you know someone who sounds like me :D Thanks for the feedback, it is highly appreciated!