Hi there! Apologies for the late reply. This is an incredibly strong performance for Lang! I like the slightly gruff, heavy backing to your performance. The inflections could be a bit more varied here and there, but I think you do a nice job. Perhaps you could focus more on capturing the sharp and cocky personality of the first line, the humble and mighty atmosphere of the second, and the more serious tone of the third. In other words, the range seems limited, but this is a very solid audition and a high contender. If you wish to submit again, you can do that too! If not, you're definitely still in the running. Thanks!