Psupers Episode 1
CarsonNCB for Shawn
Shawn is in his early 20s. He's somewhat course on the outside but his heart is made of pure gold. His view of the world is still somewhat naive, but he's starting to figure out the gray space between right and wrong. He's trying very hard to make a difference, but his naivety often holds him back. Don't make him mad, however, or he might just go ballistic...
Are you sure I can't come in tomorrow? Nobody's got a pending cancellation or anything like that?
Hey Mom, it’s Shawn. So something came up and I’m probably gonna be five-ten minutes late. No, it’s not work. No, there’s no girl involved. Yes, I’m perfectly fine. I just…never mind, I’ll tell you when I see you. Love you, bye.
Let’s just say I don’t hang out with the most upstanding of citizens. I’ve seen how they treat psupers. If they find out, I’m gone.
Nicely done! I especially loved your take on the phone call with Mom. I will say that there were a couple of times where it felt like you were forcing the line out (I hope that makes sense) - it didn't necessarily sound bad or off, but it did seem a little unusual. All in all, great job!
Thank you! I appreciate your honest and helpful feedback. :3