Arknights - Fandub Project
Ricinator for Meteorite
A self-made mercenary and prior military vigilante in Firewatch's group, Meteorite brings the experience of countless battles and an explosive payload to lay waste to Rhodes Island's enemies. In spite of her long combat record, Meteorite is a woman scarred by war and injustice against her race, to the point of her acting callously or unresponsive whenever the mention of her prior victories are mentioned.
Meteorite is very blunt about her opinions, to the point of appearing rude and callous to everyone around her, though this is more a defensive mechanism to hide her own grief over the hundreds of lives she's seen lost in conflict. To those that manage to gain her trust, she's said to be a dependable ally and a heartfelt companion, though only Firewatch has managed to commit to such a feat.
Voice: Medium - Medium-Low; Cold - Blunt -Steely
Meeting Player - Veiled Spite
Codename Meteorite, a freelance mercenary. I'm a Sarkazian, as you can see. You still wanna hire me in spite of that?Veteran Memory - Guarded Respect
My bowgun may not be easy to operate, but it's just as powerful as the guns of the Lateranos. With it, I will defend the glory of my people.Battle Quotes - Ruthless Command
Focus fire! Fire at will!
Yes, this much better in terms of giving that tone of a person who's living with hatred as your voice better conveys that great distrust within. I think the pitch you give here does work, but if it's difficult to maintain then we can try to work with your previous one, as your inflection here does make up for it. And yes, the colder nature of your re-submission here also does work for the character; so I will take this one as your primary audition.