Arknights - Fandub Project
Jess McDonald for SilverAsh
Warlord, chairman, household chief, SilverAsh is all of these things as one of the most powerful people in the Kjerag nation and now strategic player within the upper echelon of Rhodes Island. No one knows the true purpose behind his arrival and contract with the pharmaceutical company, but even the Doctor knows to keep such an influential individual at a close proximity.
SilverAsh is the combination of a dandy aristocrat and a noble entrepreneur, except he's got the military and combat training to put anyone in their place if diplomacy and money fail. Every word and statement from him appear a winding web of hidden meaning and surreptitious lies, with even his own family being in the dark about his true motives.
Voice: Low - Medium-Low; Proud - Charismatic - Wise
Meeting Player - Respectful Forewarning
I, SilverAsh, have joined your cause as a sworn ally. Whatever your plans may be, do not disappoint me.Veteran Memory - Dominant Agreement
I'm well aware this contract offers me nothing... What does that matter? I shall accept this unequal treaty nonetheless. The reason being that I, SilverAsh, recognize that you warrant it.Battle Quotes - Confident Recitation
"The fool flaunting his gallantry reaches none with his vanity..." "Art thou mine worthy enemy, or art thou naught but a jester?"
Pitch isn't low enough, as your current one isn't showing off the character's age and is actively impeding with your tone's imposing nature. Tone is much too haughty, there's no air of subtlety or nobility here that's recognizable from the character you're portraying and the pompous nature of it also is hurts your delivery. Pacing is even but it's too fast give your lines impact here, so please fix these issues before auditioning again.
Thank you for your feedback. I'll be sure to keep those in mind to improve on for the future. :)