Beyond the Darkness (GTA 5 Horror Noir Machinima)
Zozane for The Witness
The Witness is a neighbor of one the victims. He is one of the few people who has seen what “The Raven” looks like. He tries his best to describe the killer to the detectives. This is a guy in his mid-20s with an American accent.
I was in my house when I heard this loud bang. At first I thought it was just a thunder, but I decided to check it out anyway. I ran outside and saw this big guy carrying a woman to his car. He put her in the back of his truck and then drove off.
He was at least six feet tall, dressed in black. I didn’t see his face. He was wearing a mask.
I think your voice and rhythm of speech suits perfectly for this character. However, you don't have to stress the words at these parts 0:02 and 0:08. Just a little notice. Great job anyway! :)
Noted, thank you for the feedback :)