Arknights - Fandub Project
Axone for Faust
A Reunion sergeant and Mephisto's right hand man, Faust is a man of few words that holds fierce loyalty to Mephisto and Reunion as a means of survival. His quiet and apologetic demeanor is a contrast Mephisto's own boisterous and sadistic personality, though he follow him all the same to the point of risking his own life to maintain him alive.
Faust's motives for aiding someone like Mephisto stem from prior history with him, considering him a dear friend from before his joining to Reunion and holding a status of infected alongside him. Besides this, not much else is known or really heard about Faust besides that only that his undying loyalty to Mephisto can manifest into an emotional crutch that could be holding them both together emotionally.
Voice: Medium-Low - Medium; Quiet - Succinct - Principled
Apology Regarding Arriving Late - Regretful Nod
I shouldn't have let it go that far. Sorry...I've failed.Aiming For Ch'en - Cold Warning
Not a step forward or you'll get a hole in your skull. Back. Off.During Mephisto's Retreat - Self-less Encouragement
Nothing more to be done here. We've failed this mission, but you must leave.
Pitch is fine, you keep to the character's age with your lower pitch and it aids your tone somewhat though be careful if you're doing a more hushed tone with this voice pitch as it can negatively affected if it's too low. Tone itself is inconsistent, more because you're not emoting clearly in some of your lines, particularly the first and second lines where you start out brooding but you end with a less pronounced emotion. Delivery is what's really holding you back though, as your words are coming out much slower than needed and the annunciation for parts of your lines aren't strong enough, again in the initial sections of lines 1 and 2.
Thank you for the feedback. If it's alright i would like to try an improved performance?
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