Baten Kaitos: Eternal Wings and the Lost Ocean - Episode 2 (Seeking Additional Characters) - [CLOSED]
CSR Creations for Caring Girlfriend (One-shot)*
A young woman living in Pherkad whose normal life has been upturned by the sudden arrival of Alfardian Imperial soldiers in her hometown. She is determined to see her boyfriend regardless of the circumstances, and he in turn, is determined to see her safe. All 5 of her lines are here in this audition, so if you nail this audition, you will not need to record anything else unless retakes are needed.*
Concerned Boyfriend: (sternly) I told you not to come outside! Imperial soldiers are everywhere. Who knows what they might do to you!
(protesting, adamant) "But if I stayed inside, I wouldn’t be able to see you! The Empire doesn’t look like it wants to harm us…"
Concerned Boyfriend: (warily) …Yet, it doesn’t mean they won’t start. (pleading, but firmly) Stay away from them, all right?
(reluctantly) "I will…"
(concerned) "He’s worrying too much about the Empire, among other things. A little confidence wouldn’t hurt…"
I thought you got the emotions in this character down pretty well, but I do think your audition could be stronger if you slowed down a bit, especially for that first line. Otherwise, the rest of your lines were fairly solid! Also just a minor note, the verbs in that first line are present-tense, so it's "wouldn't" and "wants". :]
Thank you so much for your critique. If you'd like, I could redo the audition.
You're very welcome! Feel free to redo, if you'd like!