Arknights - Fandub Project
Nalomy for Liskarm
Liskarm is another one of Blacksteel Worldwide's operators joining Rhodes Island as security and operational detail, but with the added bonus of being a living tesla coil to Rhodes Island's enemies. Unlike some of her peers, the pragmatic and by-the-book attitude carried with Liskarm has caused much of Blacksteel and Rhodes Island's staff to hold her in respect with the exception of Franka.
Unlike Franka's professional demeanor being used as a facade to keep up appearances, Liskarm's own personality really is as serious as she makes herself out to be in and out of operations. In spite of this, she still holds a high regard for human life and will go above and beyond her pay-grade to protect those she's promised to keep safe.
Voice: Medium, Medium-Low; No-Nonsense - Calm - Professional
Meeting Player - Professional Presentation
Defender Liskarm, awaiting order sir. I've participated in multiple special operations—from personal protection of VIPs to operational raids to cleanup detail. Right now, you are my mission, so I will protect you with everything I have.Veteran Memory - Weighed Opinion
BSW is a top security contractor and a great fit for me, I think. It's just that Rhodes Island would grant me more freedom.Battle Quotes - Steeled Nerves
One bullet each.Thunder Roar!
First off, I don't think it's forced since your speech and readings are understandable and pronunciation is fair enough for the audition. There's only one issue here that does hurt it and that is the cadence, where I think you may be going a little too fast during the readings and part of the voice rushes a bit. Pitch is otherwise fine, keeps a low, older voice for the character and aids tone for the most part. tone is well done as well, as the first and second lines carry that serious nature but you could stand to be a bit more harsh on the final line.
Thank you a lot for the feedback! May I try one more time or is it gonna be too many attempts?
Yes, you get one redo for the auditions. This is to prevent this project form getting flooded with re-auditions.