Arknights - Fandub Project
MEHaynes_VA for SilverAsh
Warlord, chairman, household chief, SilverAsh is all of these things as one of the most powerful people in the Kjerag nation and now strategic player within the upper echelon of Rhodes Island. No one knows the true purpose behind his arrival and contract with the pharmaceutical company, but even the Doctor knows to keep such an influential individual at a close proximity.
SilverAsh is the combination of a dandy aristocrat and a noble entrepreneur, except he's got the military and combat training to put anyone in their place if diplomacy and money fail. Every word and statement from him appear a winding web of hidden meaning and surreptitious lies, with even his own family being in the dark about his true motives.
Voice: Low - Medium-Low; Proud - Charismatic - Wise
Meeting Player - Respectful Forewarning
I, SilverAsh, have joined your cause as a sworn ally. Whatever your plans may be, do not disappoint me.Veteran Memory - Dominant Agreement
I'm well aware this contract offers me nothing... What does that matter? I shall accept this unequal treaty nonetheless. The reason being that I, SilverAsh, recognize that you warrant it.Battle Quotes - Confident Recitation
"The fool flaunting his gallantry reaches none with his vanity..." "Art thou mine worthy enemy, or art thou naught but a jester?"
I like that you embraced the noble and prideful tone of SilverAsh, as it does work well with the more succinct delivery you had for these lines. However, I can't help but feel that you're sacrificing the imposing nature of the character through it, as well as a slower delivery with more impact in your lines. Pitch could be a bit lower as well, but it's something that's hampering your overall auditions. Overall though, it's a good attempt but keep working on better integrating the tone and slower cadence to the already good aspects of what you have here.
Thank you for the feedback. I will take what you have said and send in a retake of this character. Just to be clear, you are looking for: lower pitch; slower read; more imposing?
Yes, as well as your own judgement on how the lines will be delivered when you post them. Thank you, I will look forward to them.