RWBY Abridged Part 2
AngelicGamer951 for Nora Valkyrie
She will retain her hyperness with the crazy personality of a psychopath. As she gets crazy her only chains in the series will be Ren which has the emotion semblance so it makes sense why she feels calm around him. So you need to laugh like a serial killer scream like a maniac and lastly have a knack for improv line creating to add depth to her. I'll help of course.
(excited/jumpy) it's time... to kill… to feast… on sooouls
I can't wait to see all the bloodshed that will happen today. Well as long it doesn't include you. But you don't have to worry about me. I can handle myself. Although I knooow I'm not supposed to but I can't stop.
*Add crazy laughs screams and a bunch of psycho killer stuff the more the merrier.*
Your voice almost sounds like Nora on that first line low key. So props on that but what I love the most is the variation of emotions you got in there. What I think you can improve upon is probably more voice inflections and and drops to make it sound deranged. Cause Nora's brain is also deranged. I'm just nitpicking tho ;)
Alright thank you, I'll keep that in mind