RWBY Abridged Part 2
AllyAlliance for Nora Valkyrie
She will retain her hyperness with the crazy personality of a psychopath. As she gets crazy her only chains in the series will be Ren which has the emotion semblance so it makes sense why she feels calm around him. So you need to laugh like a serial killer scream like a maniac and lastly have a knack for improv line creating to add depth to her. I'll help of course.
(excited/jumpy) it's time... to kill… to feast… on sooouls
I can't wait to see all the bloodshed that will happen today. Well as long it doesn't include you. But you don't have to worry about me. I can handle myself. Although I knooow I'm not supposed to but I can't stop.
*Add crazy laughs screams and a bunch of psycho killer stuff the more the merrier.*
Alright not bad. I like the voice but the energy felt a bit flat as if you were reading of the script. I think to help you try to remember the lines a bit if you want to alter the script a bit you can to make it easier. Because it sounds like you tried to get it perfect but that blocked you acting ability. But some parts were good but felt flat afterwards. However not bad. ;)
Is there any way i could get in a call with u on discord like a live audition?(i understand if not). Since there wasnt any complaints about my psycho stuff and only about the lines i really want to try and get this perfect :D (and thanks for the feedback)
Hmm well we are gonna have to schedule it but I guess why not I haven't done a live audition before but if you feel more comfortable doing so then yeah sure why the heck not.
Well, i can't audition more than once on a role :( Please message my discord, which is in my audition :D