Hevn Sci-Fi Game
mookieamoose for Edna - Mining Engineer
This is a dynamic role that spans several scenes. A script will be provided where each scene has a little more context if that helps. Three of the 12 scenes are provided below as a sample.
The character for which this dialog is written, is named “Edna”.
Edna is a close friend to the main character, name Sebastian (played by the player). She is also a double agent, hiding her activities from the corporation she works for.
(Friendly, camaraderie, teasing)
You are always so dramatic. Command always gets themselves into such a twist. Leave them to me!
(Dying)
There's no time, you've got to finish what we started... Remember Komagata... (last breath)
(In confidence, voice message)
Hey Sebastian, Edna here. Sorry I missed our crew night out for the millionth time, had a last minute obligation... again. See you at the mission briefing.
Thanks for submitting! Sounds very good - well enunciated and clear! The only feedback I can offer is maybe increasing the sense of panic/anxiety, possibly with shallow breaths or anything that might enhance the nervousness.
Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it!