Hevn Sci-Fi Game
oliveeloise for EN119 - Mining Engineer
This is a brief role with about 10 speaking parts. All of the character dialogue below is heard by the player at various indoor and outdoor computer terminals. The player will interact with the terminal to listen to audio logs left by various NPC co-workers beforehand, specifically EN119, EN120, and EN121. These messages are recorded for the next co-worker to listen to.
Most of these messages are recorded in a somewhat harsh and windy outdoor environment at the end of a physical work shift.
(In a slightly winded and concerned voice)
Everything ran pretty smoothly here. Actually, I know this sounds weird but I think I saw someone up on the ledge. Yeah, it was dark... but, I dunno. Just in case, keep an eye out. They should know better.
So, I had to switch the water valve on and off a couple times. Everything seems to work ok now. No problems with the drill bit heat. By the way, there’s a hood beetle on that hill. Watch out if anyone plans on working up there.
Hey, this one is great too! The tone and feel felt solid and to the point. The only constructive feedback I might be able to offer is that the environment around the character is little harsh plus the character might be a little out of breath since it's at the end of a physical work shift (I should have pointed this out more in the role description). Also maybe the pacing could be just a tad slower in a few choice spots - as if the character is looking around while recoding this. But really that's nit picking.