RWBY Abridged
littlestdingo for Weiss Schnee
Another main staple of the series. She will kind of retain her rich girl personality. However, I'mma make her a huge rap music fan. She still is same old Weiss just more prissy.
For the voice again doesn't have to match but she still needs to sound arrogant and miss im high maintenance. To sell your performance I want to hear explosive emotions as she gets mad easy and also annoyed. But don't forget the other emotions she isn't one dimensional.
Weiss: I earn more money a day than you will in your life. Say sorry peasant!!
Weiss: (sarcastic) OMG I'm Weiss, we can also talk about boyfriends like the one who I saw you with earlier, yellow crayon over there
Weiss: what the hell is going on over here, I need my beauty sleep
Ok the first two lines were your best lines I felt the snobbish rich girl and you brought it out naturally. Though I think your last line could use more anger since you are losing sleep and everyone hates it when someone ruins your time of sleep an I right?
Thank you very much for your feedback! I think I was focusing a bit on trying to match what I remembered for pacing in the original - but in future auditions and works, I’ll be sure to bring the fire! Thank you again for your specific, actionable feedback, and - as always - thank you for your time and consideration.