Piece of Cake! Webtoon Fandub
MEHaynes_VA for Nam Young Jin
Seong Mi's love interest. He loves to bake like Seong Mi and is the son of a popular baker.
Voice: mediumish, gentle
A-Are you okay!? (kind, slightly startled/nervous, Seong Mi has ran into him and fallen down, he is extending his hand to help)
Our happiness began to fade... our old life was shattered into pieces... and happiness gave way to loneliness. (sad, reflecting on his past)
What do you want now?!? (annoyed with his friend)
Thank you for taking the time to audition for my project. In terms of feedback, I would say that Nam Young's second line was missing the sad touch I was looking for. The delivery for the second take of the third line was spot on. For the father's first line, I'm looking for a more alarmed/assertive tone for the first part when he's talking about the station and then a shift into a dismissive gotta go bye. Your tone for the second part of the first line did seem fitting, but that first part could be stronger. I liked the first take of the third line, but I did want some crying noises incorporated.
I am submitting my second takes today. Thank you for the feedback.