Kuni no Senso [EPISODES 1, 2, & 3 VAs; COMPOSERS; ARTISTS/ANIMATORS; AUDIO ENGINEERS; ETC.]
John Paul Amaya for Shirei Akui
Shirei Akui, a commander under the rule of Kunshu. Shirei is very temperamental, but is loyal to the end. He lives his life trying to show his worth in the eyes of his peers.
His voice should be low, with much grit in the second line.
*as if somebody's talking smack and they're just annoying* Shut up and be quiet, you pathetic fool.
*laying an absolute smack-down* You’re useless! A pathetic excuse for a man.
*just got a nice hard blow to the ego, but still wanting to keep a threatening appearance* If you weren’t a girl I would kill you where you stand. And you. You’re a lucky bastard that she is here.
You seem to be rushing the lines slightly with this one. The pacing for the second line is alright, but the other two lines don't have the threatening vibe to it.