[CLOSED] Fallout: New Vegas Redesigned
stm templar for Legion soldier (This is a paid role $)
Payment: $15 for the chosen audition for the Legion soldier.
The following is inspired by the fanfiction writing "A Slave for Caesar" by Starsa83. This will be one of two audio logs that the Courier (the main player) will pick up from a tent of a Legion soldier.
Woman: (crying) (sobbing) (wailing) Please! Show mercy! (crying) He was only trying to help! He didn’t do anything wrong (pleading). Please I beg of you!! Please show mercy!!! (crying) (wailing) PLEASE!! PLEASE!! I BEG OF YOU!!! (wailing, crying) Please master!!
Legion soldier: (cold) Do you see… what your actions have caused?
Woman: (fear) (crying) (sobbing) (shivering)
Legion soldier: (talk to the side as if you’re talking to the side) Crucify him!
Woman: (crying) (sobbing) (wailing) NO! NO!!! NOOOOO! (wailing) Please Master! NOOO!! HAVE MERCY! HAVE MERCY! HE DID NOTHING WRONG!! NOTHING!!!!! (wailing and crying)
Legion soldier: SILENCE!! (Loud booming voice)(Menacing)
This is how your life will be from this moment on. You will be my slave in every sense of the word.
Your collar will never leave your neck and you will never walk alone amongst the men in this camp!
I said it before and I will say it again, one last time!
You are mine, Forever!
Do you understand? (cold tone) (Changed this from all caps because I think the yelling is hard to do)
Woman: (crying) (sobbing) ……(crying)………..Yes…..master….(sobbing)
Audio cuts out
The emotion is perfect on your first rendition. But he's too...regal. It still works but I need him to be...shiftier. Shadier. Not necessarily deeper in voice although it helps.. Some voice examples are Sephiroth, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cfk38JVt32M Spartacus's Glaber (youtube "Glaber Demands a Demonstration"), https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=959RtyL6ovk Clancy Brown's Lex Luthor from the animated series...seriously a great villainous voice
Thanks for the feedback. Im always looking to improve. Haha yea sorry bout the regal-ness, I used other legion soldiers in the game as my reference, didn't know what ya were looking for. Alright I'll try again, this time using the reference material ya gave me (thanks for that by the way). Should I submit a second audition? or have this one deleted first?
Please do a second audition as I like to take the best of each audition and combine them into one.
Right on! Thanks for the time!