Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
not-on-helium for Monochrome a.k.a. Beth
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language: Upbeat voice, some slang; cusses sometimes (add them where you see fit); high pitch, but not that of a child; slight British accent is preferred but not mandatory (if you do try the accent, please also record your voice without it for comparison, unless it's natural)
History/relationships: Sniper of the Rifa Rangers, er- Game changers (rebranded)
Personality: A level headed individual with a nose for excitement. Not the most studious person out there but definitely street-smart. She's always willing to help Reaper, even if it's getting into messes, but she also knows where to draw a line.
Feel free to vary tone and wording, this character likes to cuss a bit too. I'm interested to hear what you've got!
Excited, trying to persuade someone
"It is Halloween, a little spook couldn’t hurt."
Happy
"Reaper! Guess what? They're making a movie! I can watch an entire hour's worth of Carmilla, isn't that just awesome?"
Scared, surprised
"My eyes...what happened to my eyes?"
Angry, threatening
"This better be the last time you pull a stunt like this! Hound is going to give you an earful for sure."
Monologue; cheery, sarcastic, informative
"Saving the world? Easy. Keeping an eye on Reaper? Now that's a challenge. And I'm the sniper, I'm supposed to good with my eyes! Well, I can't give you my actual name yet, no-one's done a background check on you and I don't want to take any chances. Though if you ask me, Reaper's a little too paranoid." [chuckles] "You can call me Monochrome for now. So how can we be of service?"
No need to apologise! Your audition was lovely, thank you for putting the time and effort to submit another take, I really appreciate it. Like with your last audition, your pacing and emphasis on words are great and this time the emotive tones match the character too. The extra chuckles in the monologue were a nice touch, well done! Thanks again for the audition!
this is an extremely late reply but i really appreciate the feedback once again! it’s really admirable how you leave feedback on basically every audition. i’m so excited to see where this arc is gonna go!
Aww, thank you! I want to help people as much as they've wanted to help me, so hopefully my feedback (even if not the best) does just that haha. Hopefully the project goes according to plan too!
you’re feedback is wonderful! and i’m sure that everything’s going to go great with this project
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