Ok so your audio quality is miles above what is was before. That being said while i do enjoy you acting its, to be straightforward, not what its being looked for at all. You have a very calm and quiet tone which doesn't really work for Risa who in her first line is tsundere as all get out, and who could use a bit of emotion in the third line. Here's my advice, some research on the role or the game can really help if you want this role. You can keep auditioning as long as the role is up and i will look at all of them. Godd luck if you try again, on that note you would make a really good extra because the professional tones works for the teachers if you want to consider that role.