Alright now that i had the time to form an opinion here is my feedback, I want to say it was good and the acting is rhater on point but it feels like it got murdered in audacity that first one specifically. The second one while less so seemed to pick up a bti of background noise. I recommend reaudtioning with perhaps a little less editing because audacity really messed up your first attempt.
Wow thank you, this feedback has been super helpful. My set up is fairly new and I'm used to working in an actual studio vs my home studio in building so the engineering side has been a struggle. The only thing I did in audacity was the background noise suppression because my mic keeps picking up the fan of my unit. I'll re audition once I have my kinks worked out. Thank you.