Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
TAGOrigins for Locus a.k.a. Vincent
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language: Casual, some slang; cusses sometimes (add them where you see fit); any pitch that isn’t too high or too deep is fine; slight British accent is preferred but not mandatory (if you do try the accent, please also record your voice without it for comparison, unless it's natural)
History/relationships: Scout of the Rifa Rangers, er- Game changers (rebranded). A character of Chinese origin.
Personality: A comedian and also a workaholic. A smart one at that. Well, when it comes to computers at least. Sometimes. his charisma pulls him through where his general dullness may mess up. He can be reliable when it comes down to it, but in a fight or flight situation, he's always going to choose flight; he likes his body functioning the way it is.
Feel free to vary tone and wording, I'm interested to hear what you've got!
Excited, eager
"Check this out!" [clears throat] "Odysseus, turn on the lights." [pause] "Cool right?"
Mocking, reminiscent
[laughs] "Remember that time when Big Man said she had a wet fart? Ahh, those were the days."
Worried, confused
"Uh oh. This isn't good. Odysseus shouldn't be recording so much data like that. I wonder what's caused this to happen."
Concerned
"I'm not sure how I'm going to explain this to my nan or dad. I mean, I teleport. Yeah, it's without clothes, but still."
Monologue; informative, sarcastic and mocking
"So we have a sniper who shoots lasers. Support who talks to dogs. A techie who can teleport and...what is it you're going do again, Reaper? Oh right! Charge head first into a fight. Brilliance at its finest, Big Man, brilliance at it's finest." [sighs] "OK, maybe I'm being a little hard on you, but do you mind if you stick back for a bit? We have The Spades helping out, so I think it's best if you serve as medic. But hey, you don't have to listen to me, it's not like I'm the one with the brains here."
The laugh didn't sound quite so natural. Other than that, well done on a nice audition; emotion and pacing were certainly good. A few words were hard (but not impossible) to pick out, though I think it's because of pronunciation. Your effort and enthusiasm in the role shows, I appreciate the time you've taken for this audition!
I figured the laugh wouldn't be too good. Thank you for pointing that out, I definitely need to work on that. Thank you for the kind words!