Please Don't Bully me Nagatoro manga dub
Zilpa Eden for Nagatoro
Nagatoro is a freshman preppy girl who is bored with confident guys hitting on and flirting with her. When she runs into senpai her life gets more color as she starts teasing and bullying him. She is sadistic at times, but also very innocent at others. With a flair for the dramatic she is a very athletic and animated character. An immature, fast talker and quick witted but also subject to the innocence of youth (despite how forward she is). I really want to try and emulate this voice from the ad, (I understand that no one is her but it is a great example of how I imagine her voice) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cVqBgmvvwro. She also has a possessive nature at times. I'm looking for a teenage girl sound, range should probably be highish but if you can give me a bully that everyone loves then we are cooking with gas!
I'm a freshman. Are you a sophmore? (Senpai "Y-Yeah") AHA! Bullseye! Then you are my senpai. (Inquisitive and interested, then like you have cornered your prey and are toying with him)
Senpai even though you're a boy... You're so weak. (taunting)
Senpai, please run!!! Senpai!! Leave this to me and run!!! (Heroically)
I do like the tone and attitude you have there. The immaturity that you have and childish theatrical nature you have are great! If I had to choose one thing that bugs me about this it is that it sounds a little bit nasally in your 1st line takes. It's a minor complaint but unfortunately it sticks out to my ear. Your second take on the first line was much better. I like the faster talking that you did as well. It sounds like she is able to think quickly on her feet and that I like!
Thank you so much! I'll take your critique into account and try to do better! I did a retake, hope I works!