I loved your energy for these auditions, and I especially appreciate you going through lines again but delivering them in a different way. It allows directors to see more variety from the voice actor themselves. Some critiques though. I think, if it's possible, you should try moving into a more compact room in your house, specifically the closet. The closet is closed off enough and probably has enough clothes to where the sound doesn't bounce off the walls. which causes background echo and that acoustic feel to the sound. It may seem uncomfortable at first (If it's not a walk-in closet), but you'll get better results from your sound in the long run. As for your voice, while it is great and full of energy, it does seem a bit older for Kotori. She's younger and more naive, so I believe she would have a higher pitch to her voice. All in all though, you did have a nice audition, and I thank you for auditioning!
Thank you so much!! I will try these tips! Thank you for listening!
You're welcome! Break a leg in future auditions!