Fallen:backstory (audio drama)
boistehrous for Brendan O'Connell (REOPENED)
The closest friend of Zeke's who's still alive. Brendan is part of the Irish Defence Forces.
Originally from Dublin, Ireland, Brendan is a usually happy-go-lucky person. He's very laid back and will crack the old joke or two to brighten the mood. Despite this, he's no fool; he will be serious when it's called for. His unit works closely with the marines; this was how he met Zeke.
They work together in order to keep the area the marines are in safe (when it comes to the locals that is). Despite this, Brendan has gotten into a fight or two with Zeke's opponents.
Brendan's usually the light-hearted one of the group; a very logical person but will get carried away with keeping things right; causing him to get into trouble from time to time. despite this, he tends to keep on a level playing field; getting both sides of the argument.
(voice description: his voice is a bit softer comparing to Zeke's; his accent isn't too strong but enough to tell one that he's from Dublin, not Kerry (the one hollywood uses for the Irish accent). He sounds a lot like the Rubberbandits with a Dublin accent.)
(cheerful) Weeeell! What's going on here, huh? (teasing) Anythin' worth nosin' in for?~
(serious) Ugh, bleedin' eejit! What'd ya go do that for?! Would ya just calm down for once? Feck's sake, Zeke!
(soft and quiet tone) Ey....if it makes ya feel any better now, I's been there too. But trust me: T'is only uphill from here, boy. Don't be beatin' yerself over nonsense...
only a temp mic :)
Hello my dear! Thank you for this! I love your tone with him! So calm but yet has that energy to it! This may seem a stretch but maybe ya need to be more expressive, you sound almost distant and as much amazing work is here it's needing to be up a bit when it comes to volume. When he's cheerful ya need to be move lively!~ Besides that it's a really good audition!~ your accent and such is perfect! But just for an experiment if you considering redoing it for whatever reason like a few others have, maybe try get a bit deeper in one take and then the other have without like the way people read them twice! I like you! I see you being a Brendan besides that! And the experiment sounds fun! Good luck!
Appreciate the constructive criticism, I submitted another one, let me know what you think!