I do enjoy the energy you put into this audition, but your voice portrayal sounds a bit too grainy for Yuma's voice. For future auditions, I'd also advise taking some moments to breathe a little. It sounded like you were rushing through all the lines in one take. Don't worry about it, buddy. I think CCC has a five minute time limit, so as long as you get it within that time frame, I think you'd be good.
So do you want me to retake in a less grainy voice, I would be able to do that.
Yeah! I'd be down to hear another audition! Just less grainy of a voice and remember to take your time with some of the line deliveries. Kind of say them to the point where they flow smoothly, if that makes sense?
Sure, I’ll work on it tonight