I'm glad you had a fun time with this audition! I was hoping people would, haha. I think you did a good job with the attitude for Shark as well, but for future reference, I'd say try flowing the words a bit faster. There were some pauses in between your sentences that would make it a bit hard to match a character's lip flaps in post. Saying the lines a bit faster would make it sound bit more nature, I'd say. All in all, I think you did a good job, and I thank you for auditioning!
Of course! In the case you do pick me, I'd watch out for the lip flaps and try to speed up the dialogue as much as I can, haha. Thank you for the opportunity once again!