Future characters for BIG dreams die hard!
TryingAgain for Incineroar
Incineroar is yet another of K. Rool's underlings. He is however in a high position and K. Rool values him as one of his best men. Just as you'd expect he is a hot-headed ruffian, who enjoys nothing more than to terrorize the weak. Because of this he acts more like your typical bully. Everything but soft-spoken and definitely not the brightest.
Please give him a deep, grumpy voice.
I shall see to it immediately, my king.
Out of my way filth!
(confident) Do you honestly believe you stand a chance? (suddenly uncertain) I will break your bones before you can say... uh... what rhymes with back breaker?
The voice is nice, but it could be a slight bit deeper. it should also be a little grumpier. It honestly sounded a bit too... normal. If you are really keen on the role, I would suggest a retake. But you still did a good job.