VALKYRIA CHRONICLES 4: Squad Stories (NEW EPISODE: "A Chivalrous Heart") - 1F
OZZY DAYO~ for Federation Soldier
A soldier who confronts Mabel about Fleuret's bad habits on the shooting range.
Voice type: Anything goes - let's see what you've got!
"What are ya gettin' all snappy for, Mabel?"
"Well... yeah. She can't shoot for shit."
Welcome to the world of VA - there's a first time for everyone! You're a bit quiet so either get closer to the mic or adjust your volume levels. Also I can detect a bit of an echo - are you recording in a big room? Apart from those things, your performance is a good start... take my two notes in mind and any future auditions will really stick out for myself and other directors. Thanks for auditioning! You're more than welcome to re-submit! :)
Thank you very much! And yes, I am in a big room without enough objects to clutter it up and absorb the sound. The quiet voice was in result of me trying to reduce the noise of my loud-whirring laptop that I can't get to quiet down any further. I have tried many places in my room to reduce the echo without make it sound boxed in(like a closet), but not really much of a solution so far. I'll definitely re-submit when I've situated myself in the room better. Thank you for your feedback.